Post by Dawnstar on Jun 17, 2010 13:37:34 GMT -5
Dawnheart padded slowly around the moon pool. She was anxiouse for the moon to hit it JUST right.
When the moon finaly hit it she looked at it while it glowed, it was so pretty. Dawnheart slowly dipped her paw in the water, then she fell asllep.
Dawnheart heard something, something beautiful. "Hello my child, are you ready for your leader ceramony?" Dawnheart nodded her head. "I, Moonlily, give you the life of bravery." A sheer jolt of pain shot through Dawnheart, she gritted her teeth trying not to yowl. Then Dawnheart's mother left.
"I, Huntkit, give you the life of speed." Huntkit, Dawnheart's only little tom gave her speed? She took the breathless pain that swept over her.
"I, Gingerkit, give you the life of love." Dawnheart wanted to lick her right then. She was ready for the pain, but Gingerkit's touch felt soft and sweet. She had forgotten everything.
"I, Nightstar, give you the life of strength." Nightstar was Dawnheart's father, strong and willing. She wasnt ready when he touched her. His touch made her feel as if she had touched a twoleg powerline, that shocked and fried her prey all the time.
"I, Firestar, give you the life of willing." Dawnheart's eyes widened. Firestar? Hes my ansestor? She thought. He touched her and she felt a sharp pain, not as bad as Nightstar's but this one was a seriouse pain.
"I, Rosepaw, give you the life of courage." The young apprentice was the one Dawnheart helpt ou of the lake a long time ago, had this kit died anyway? She touched her and Dawnheart felt a pain that made her yowl. "Dont worry. You didnt kill me....my father did." She reasured her.
"I, Bouncestep, give you the life of happiness." Bouncestep had been Shadowclan's deputy and Dawnheart's best friend before he died on the thunderpath. Dawnheart felt a shrill pain as in a steam rolloer crushing her bones. She opened her eyes.
"I, poppystar, give you the life of boundless energy." Poppystar, Riverclan's former leader,
"I sapose you died too?" She asked. "oh" He touched her and a pain made her feel like biting his paw off, but she didnt.
"I, Lilyflower, give you the life of mothering." She bent dow and Dawnheart felt a soft soothing feeling.
"OK You now and forever will be known as Dawnstar." Moonlily stated. "Goodbye and goodluck."
When the moon finaly hit it she looked at it while it glowed, it was so pretty. Dawnheart slowly dipped her paw in the water, then she fell asllep.
Dawnheart heard something, something beautiful. "Hello my child, are you ready for your leader ceramony?" Dawnheart nodded her head. "I, Moonlily, give you the life of bravery." A sheer jolt of pain shot through Dawnheart, she gritted her teeth trying not to yowl. Then Dawnheart's mother left.
"I, Huntkit, give you the life of speed." Huntkit, Dawnheart's only little tom gave her speed? She took the breathless pain that swept over her.
"I, Gingerkit, give you the life of love." Dawnheart wanted to lick her right then. She was ready for the pain, but Gingerkit's touch felt soft and sweet. She had forgotten everything.
"I, Nightstar, give you the life of strength." Nightstar was Dawnheart's father, strong and willing. She wasnt ready when he touched her. His touch made her feel as if she had touched a twoleg powerline, that shocked and fried her prey all the time.
"I, Firestar, give you the life of willing." Dawnheart's eyes widened. Firestar? Hes my ansestor? She thought. He touched her and she felt a sharp pain, not as bad as Nightstar's but this one was a seriouse pain.
"I, Rosepaw, give you the life of courage." The young apprentice was the one Dawnheart helpt ou of the lake a long time ago, had this kit died anyway? She touched her and Dawnheart felt a pain that made her yowl. "Dont worry. You didnt kill me....my father did." She reasured her.
"I, Bouncestep, give you the life of happiness." Bouncestep had been Shadowclan's deputy and Dawnheart's best friend before he died on the thunderpath. Dawnheart felt a shrill pain as in a steam rolloer crushing her bones. She opened her eyes.
"I, poppystar, give you the life of boundless energy." Poppystar, Riverclan's former leader,
"I sapose you died too?" She asked. "oh" He touched her and a pain made her feel like biting his paw off, but she didnt.
"I, Lilyflower, give you the life of mothering." She bent dow and Dawnheart felt a soft soothing feeling.
"OK You now and forever will be known as Dawnstar." Moonlily stated. "Goodbye and goodluck."